Poem -
Dinner Party Distraction
I watched the most exquisite bloom,
An object for admiring eyes,
Glide gracefully into the room
And sail upon a sea of sighs.
Resplendent in a satin gown
That matched her long cascading hair,
Rich auburn curls that trickled down
Soft flawless skin her dress laid bare.
Her beauty sparkled like a star
And stole the gaze and sideways glance
Of every man, both near and far,
Transfixed by her pure elegance.
A vision truly to behold
Of ravishing seductive style,
If only she would be so bold
To look up and return a smile.
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I don't usually go for this kinda write, mainly the subject matter isn't for me. But this had me hooked..gorgeous opening, love the detail in the imagery
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Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)
A poem to describe the pleasure of enjoying a dinner in the light of candles next to a beautiful, playful, I like the poem, with four words he perfectly defines the spell of the pleasure of a dinner as a prelude to love.
Adam Latham says:
“He visto la floración más exquisita en el objeto de admiración dentro de tus ojos, deslizarse con gracia infinita en la sala mientras navegaba sobre un mar de suspiros”
There is no doubt that Adam writes well and that any situation of life he contemplate it and draws it through the eyes of a poet.
A greeting and are welcome to COSMOFUNNEL, no, I'm not the Ambassador of the month, act as such the 365 days of the year, this year one more to be leap.
Hi Lucas. :) Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poem.