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Do You Ever Look Back on Those Days

Do you remember
way back ..
 When you asked me
what you
might wear, and I said
with a grin ..
Maybe something
quite loose
like a dress, perhaps ..
Ha .. even
back then, I just knew
I should have
said something else ..
Still, I must
now confess my friend ..
Every now
and again, I do wonder
if you knew
what I had on my mind
back then ..
Hey and don’t you forget,
before I forget
that is ..
Did you really put a drop of
my all-time
favourite, by Je-Riviens
here and there ..
Or may that have just been
your own idea
in the first place, perhaps ..
But do it again,
just for old times’ sake ..
And wow,
come  to think of it, how
did we ever,
manage to cram so much
into one day ..
Oh’ and likewise, do you
remember
those coffee’s we shared
in that old
Toby Inn off the A309 ..
Back then
I imagine, we could have
just talked
the entire night away ..
For now tho’
do you ever recall that
quaint little
restaurant, the one before
the lights,
on Old Station Road ..
Well maybe
not quaint, but surely
more quirky..
The one, where I bought you
your lunch that day
and while on the subject
do you ever
think back to my black
Alfa Romeo
and those cute leather
seats it had ..
Well I guess you may never
now know
what games sprang to mind
at the time tho’
I thought you imagined
them too ..
But that was a long time ago
and you are
now well and truly, forgiven ..
For jumping
to hasty conclusions and
listening to
the gossip and rantings
of an old
jealous woman, who once
lived on a
mountain and is no longer
with us ..
But still I wonder, do you
ever look back
on those days, and smile inwards ..

 

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Marion

Well hello...just came on and lovely to see a post from you Nev. Always enjoy your writes. Love how this work takes the reader through a train of personal and intimate thoughts and memories....feel like a fly on the wall...excellent stuff x

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Neville

Blimey, bless you our M .. this is one of those scribbles I pulled from a box labelled 'should I post or not' .......... and thank you for being that fly on the wall .. I could tell I was being watched .. that's why I kept it clean .......................................................................................... x

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Marion

Lol...glad you kept it clean but I may possibly have a dirty imagination 😆
christ...it sure is dead on here!!
I find myself posting just to annoy myself these days...not so much fun!! Hope you get this reply as I'm having nothing but trouble with cosmo both posting and receiving. Anyway...hope you are very well Neville...x

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Neville

I am Neva that far away M .. it has just been hectic wot with my daughter getting married an all .. I will be in touch  ............. x

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Marion

Oh wow...has it happened?
Family events even with all the stress are ultimately the only things that matter and I hope you enjoy or have enjoyed immensely Nev😊 No...I wasn't meaning you my friend ..I meant that cosmo is utterly dismal with the lack of engagement and interaction...all the new ones do is post and run...it has gotten so that's exactly what I now do too...what's the point? Hugs x

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Neville

Hi Marion 
yes it has happened, my daughter has finally got married .. she has kept her last name though & her wedding bouquet was an exact replica from an old black & white photo of my own mums .. which was a very nice surprise and a well kept secret until the day .. my daughters big day that is .. 

sorry to hear that this place has changed so much .. I guess it is still strange times  .. coupled with an increasing and more generalised apathy of course .. I am never more than just a few clicks away should you ever need to rant :) x
 

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Marion

Sounds beautiful ...and a really touching gesture the bouquet, it is such moments give life continuity and meaning. And hey...I don't always rant...sometimes I speak gently😊 As for cosmo...couldn't care less, I write for release not for audience but its still nice to have friends on here though. Most are long gone and sadly for the very reason mentioned above 😔😔

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Neville

I know you dont & I should have said vent .. maybe .. x

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Hi Neville! glad you posted cool nostalgic write! and very happy for you and your daughter! all the best my friend!......................................................Jim

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Being Me

Oh I enjoyed reading this! A real little tale and that glorious bit at the end about the old woman who lived on the hill. That bit intrigues me 🤣🤣🤣  Hope all is well with you Neville xx

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Neville

Ha .. one only need ask ............ in the meantime tho' bless your little cotton socks, your wooly hat and everything in-between x

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