Poem -
Don't Ignore Me
They saw me
They saw me
But walked
As I lay on the ground
Cold, bleeding, crying
And as I reached out
For somebody's hands
Their minds implied
"Keep dying"
So I balled up my fist
And struck the earth
With the last of my
Beating existence
If this is life
In black and white
Then its natural
That I show resistance
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This is Stunning Curious!!..........from the pic to the powerful choices you make with your words............the images you create in the minds eye of your reader is VERY special my friend...............WOW!!..........just STUNNING brother!!....... 8*s FAV ............well done............T xo
Much appreciated Tony, I appreciate your comment man, really it means a lot..just know that I appreciate the love...I hope it wasn't too heavy
CO
This one is difficult for me to reply...
First time for everything...
It is strange to really see yourself as the one...
Laying down and...
EVERYONE JUST LOOKS...
Great Write...
sparrowsong
Well I guess I kind of meant for this poem to be a general idea that sometimes people just ignore those who need help or who are in pain as though they couldn't see them, I have never literally been lying on the ground hurt and still ignored though I'm sure that kind of thing happens all around the world, there's proof of it too, and thank you
CO
I think it's better to see yourself as the one doing the ignoring, because that is when you realize the purpose and learn the lesson of this poem
such beautiful words...sad, and inspiring
Keep on writing ;)
Giggles the Poet