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Dots on a drawing board

Dots on a drawing board

We have dissimal names with different faces from cultured countries and indigenous races

Just like tiny dots on a drawing board, but each moving around using a vocal chord

Some are happy yet some are not, trying to cope with what they’ve got

 Living isn’t easy it’s a routined rat race, toing and froing betwixt our planet’s big space

Our world is enormous,far-reaching and far-flung, with an ever growing population of newly born young

Yet 7.8 billion of us get around on our globe, stood on a spinning spiral like a minute microbe

 We traverse here and there and everywhere, on earth’s ground and through it’s air

 But just like buzzy bees in a honeycomb, we will wander off then come back home

Each and every one of us busy doing our thing, like a man on a mission or a bird on the wing

They say that life is for living so that is exactly what we do, until we meet our maker when he eradicates you

 So until that dreaded day when the Lord shall call, we learn from our mistakes amidst the rise and fall

 Some of us prefer company yet others go it alone, most of us are infamous but then there’s the well-known

They hide their selves away, though celebrities, standing out in a crowd coz of their stardom popularities..

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Jim "The Lad" ....

fun stuff! great write Jill!..................................................................lad

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanksx 💕❤️💕

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Jill Tait

❤️💕❤️

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Shaun Cronick

Jill beautifully put and well said, your poem and its message flows like a good and warmly welcomed wine.
Superb writing and rhyme all round and loved these lines among many...
 But just like buzzy bees in a honeycomb, we will wander off then come back home
Each and every one of us busy doing our thing, like a man on a mission or a bird on the wing
Loved it! and full deserved honours bestowed and be back tomorrow to read more my poetic penfriend.👌❤️
And nearly forgot... Thank you Jill for all the good you tirelessly offer this site and the good you bestow on its members.
 

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Jill Tait

Awwww You are too kind honestly my catchup kid 🙏❤️💕

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Marion

Wow Jill...a lot of deep thought in this one. So many of us each with our very important little lives yet each of us a meaningless atom within the vastness of the cosmos...hugs đź’•

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Jill Tait

❤️🌹💕🌹❤️

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