Poem -
Down The Crooked Way
Consumed by the darkness
That I create,
Left with my hate
That's thrown me down the crooked way.
Who knew, being wicked could be so much fun
Cursing wrath over the puritans,
Whatever shred of dignity please shed light
In lateness I realize I can't afford the devil's price.
Blessed be the knowledge possessed
Lead astray for it I thirst,
Sweet illumination could be my salvation
But death surely is my rightful curse.
Never thought my curiosity
Would get the better of me,
But even the best of men would say
It only takes a bit of tragedy
To make a poor man turn down the crooked way.
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Comments
Tremendous ! Â :)
Thanks a bunch Mr.ambassador
Thank you for sharing your work ! Â :)
I really appreciate you reading and commenting thanks Richard I'll have check out some of your work I don't believe I've read anything of yours.
:) Thanks ! It is always good to get some feedback !
Hey D!!..........love this subject matter..........as usual........another well conceived write..........always impressive..........but you are truly making leaps and bounds in your attack and your phrasing brother.........."Sweet illumination could be my salvation! "...............excellent delivery here...........well done my friend............smiles.........T xo
Thanks T, that is awesome to hear! I really needed that confidence booster. My ideas lately have been few and far between but this I enjoyed, started writing and didn't stop.
Devon this is excellent writing, this poem has a palpable spirit, your image is terrific but your words shine....yeah I enjoyed reading this a lot, inspiring stuff....cheers
Christopher thanks a lot man! Iam very pleased to have such Wonderful Feedback, and to hear inspiring well cheers to you good sir you put a shining smile on my face.