Poem -
Dream
By Magic Bellmore, Queen of Chaos
Sparkling stars twinkle above,
Gentle howls lull us to sleep,
Twisting and Soaring dragons above,
Fiery Proud phoenixes call,
Wolves and Warriors run by our sides,
Cries and clamours of dreams,
Angels soaring above our heads,
Demons calling beneath our feet,
Elves and pixies chatty laughs,
Soft low bellows of creatures unknown,
Oh what a Utopia dreamland can create,
Oh what a Dystopia a dreamland can predict,
What, Where, Who and Why,
We'd rather die with our heads in the clouds,
Than fall to our knees here back on earth.
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Comments
Smashing poet yet again Bell! Amazing and creative write. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
Lovely write Magic...especially like and agree100% with the last line. Lovely imagery...hugs π
Lovely write Magic. Especially agree 100% with the last line!! Lovely imagery π
Wow!! MAGIC B!!...there is so much wonderful wordplay going on throughout this piece.....from line to line.....contradictory and opposites twirling back and forth...up and down.....painting the picture vividly.....that we as humans have the ability to choose..... to see......or not to see....For THAT is the question (Shakespeare quip~smiles).....you've done this SOO beautifully throughout that I am loathe to point out just one ~
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Some VERY fine wordsmithing running like lifeblood throughout this magically informative and inspiring write!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....Bravo.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ : )
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Beautifully written piece. was a pleasure to read
Magic! I love this poem ! and most the last two lines that inspire action! I also heard from TFOTS that I had you to thank for pointing out my poem Little Droplet. It meant sooo! much that someone cared about my personal fav. poem! So THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Your poet friend ! Jim