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Drowning

Drowning

Don't know which is worse?

Drowning in our tears

Or drowning in our fears

Can't tell if there is light at the end of this tunnel

Nothing seems to reach nor channel

Don't know which is worse?

Drowning in our pain

Or drowning in our doubt

Can't find any help in this miserable hole

Nothing seems to heal nor give hope

Don't know which is worse?

Drowning in our hopes

or drowning in our failures

Can't say if it safe to believe in this dying world

Nothing seems to come easy or go exactly as planned

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Lucas Lazar

Until dark and long night it has a finish to emerge after a bright tomorrow. Equally terrible is to perish between tears that surrounded by fear, is just as horrible to drown in a sea of certain pain that perish in a well of doubt, hopes and failures are just a burden that makes it possible to climb to the clouds and down again to the Earth.

Cleo Says:

“No puedo decir si es seguro creer en este mundo agonizante, nada parece fácil ni ir exactamente como lo previsto”

We are human beings and as such we fall and we got up, we laugh, we cry, we have courage, we are cowards, we are very sad and happy in the morning to the evening.

A hug, the composition is written in impeccable form and its content talks about all those emotions that we stop or pushing us to move forward.

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Bradford

Hey cleo, I think drowning in both of our failures and sometimes hopes are enough in it self . We are simply coasting through this life ,waiting for Jesus's return to restore order to this world . Hugs to you rock 

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The Bee

He Cleo, a good write this one, you ask the right questions to which there is no definitive answer, except to say, its a roller coaster ride HANG ON!! Thank you Cleo for sharing this one oxoxo :-)

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The Bee

Meant to start "Hey Cleo ........."

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