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Drowning in this depression

Drowning in this depression

I mean I could be 
Dying 
And no one 
Even bothers 
To save me 
From drowning 
In my depression 
Literally 
I mean i don't know 
Whats wrong with me
I'm always trying to save 
Everyone but 
Who's  there to save me ?

                                                                                                          ESMERALDA.R
 

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Dean Kuch

That's because we who are depressed tend to hang with like-minded people. Many of our friends are so wrapped up in their own problems that they tend to forget about everyone else.
A true friend is someone who wants to be around you even when you're at your most difficult to be around.
Nicely penned, Esmeralda.
~Dean ?

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Dean Kuch

My pleasure, you're more than welcome.
~Dean  :}

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Tony Taylor

A truly lonely place to be!!......I think many writers visit that place from time to time!!......... well penned dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!!..... Love the pic ESMERELDA!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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Rickey Chatham

BOO understands... you would give your own life vest to save a drowning victim if your ship went down in the treacherous sea. But after you do the good deed, you realize that there is noting to save yourself, on cries of despair. I kinda feel like I am drowning myself, the depression swallows up, caught in the darkness with no light house to guide the way. Am in dark place right now and this poem seems fitting, a reflection of one of the moods that hit me like a brick wall. Words have magical power. I think, perhaps, Jesus is the only one that can truly save us... life wil perish on earth, soon, for each of us. Lovely poem~ BOO ghost.

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Esmeralda Rivera

Yes indeed , I just want to get out of this darkness. I can’t deal with this anymore , Always helping everyone , while I just sink to the deep end !!! 

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