Poem -
Drunks
We dont realize when were drunk.
We can be so cruel.
Until we wake up the next morning feeling like a fool.
Wishing we could take back the things we said.
That leave us feeling emotionaly dead.
After a night of ruining our name.
We spend the day in shame.
So we say will never drink again.
But them words are all in vain.
Because the next time we feel pain.
Will pick up that drink.
So we dont have to feel or think.
And we do this over and over again.
Knowing its a place a hundred times we been.
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Dedicated to the AA
GreetingsĀ Rachel,
This is the most realist rendition of the wows of a drinker, that i have pleasured myself to read, in quite a while and to many, that try and avoid the same old, keep doing as you do, and you shall continue getting what you get routine, this tends to hit home, sadly speaking....Well wrote and with a true cause to be dedicated.......
Warm regards,
JimĀ
Thank you so much for your kind words. And for taking the time to read it. I glad you liked it.
wow your poetry is so heartfelt,alot people will relate to this
as so many people have been at that level in life,
i really enjoyed your poem as its being so realistic
great writing
great read
Thank you so much im glad you liked it.. Im glad you took the time to read it, and you let me share it with you.
Nice write Rachel :)
Thank you so much for your kind words. And for taking the time to read it. I glad you liked it.
wow so true I felt it with the soles of my heart
Thank you so much your kind words mean alot to me. Im glad you liked it thank you for letting me share this with you.