Poem -

Dull

I went to the market today

Beautiful things don't look beautiful no more

A decorative porcelain

A richly wrapped confectionary

A fancy pair of socks

All dusty, dry and dead

I went to the market today

Delicious things don't look delicious no more

They just don't look right in this new world of sepia

They're too bright and alien

And it's true

They have come from other lands

Produced and packaged by nameless slave labourers

All along we've been exploiting them

As they've toiled away

In their world of grey

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Pratibha Savani

Ooohh something to think about. The modern world we so call live in with excessive of everything. Great poem.

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al Bikaadi

Thanks Pratibha, 

Yes. It's sad what we do to each other and it's hard to change the culture. 

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Katina Woodruff...

Something to ponder... I like the feel of the poem and the shortness of it. 

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Delicious things don't look delicious no more

I got an image of a person strolling throughout the vacant city, trying to find an array of hope that there was life still happening. 

In this sentence, "Produced and packaged by nameless slave labourers"

I felt for the laborers who have worked behind the scenes to produce many valuable goods and services. There is a lot of fear and anxiety about the future of their jobs and who will be looking for a new job. 

Thank you for sharing your poem. 

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