Poem -
EARTH SKY AND MOON
I'm just walking with you
But they don't understand
I can't give them a time
Or a way to define
My return
I walk happier here
Ambling with you
On the fringes of heaven
And God strolls with us too
I'm still holding your hand
Your warmth still in mine
They still don't understand
I can't give them a time
I can't let you go on
No...not yet, it's too soon
And it's calm in this place
Between earth sky and moon
I dont want to go back
They just can't understand
They say lines must be drawn
in the dust and,
They must but,
I'm happier here
Between earth sky and moon
Strolling with you
I'll not go back too soon
M P 16/12/21
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Take your time , only you will know when the time is right. Some very heartfelt poems have been born from those walks....
keep writing Marion~❤️Rob
Bless you Rob x
I often say this to myself: I'm not yet ready" . Time will tell.
lovely write Marion. Than you for sharing.
Happy Christmas to you and your family
Thankyou.love x
I agree with Rob. Take your time! Whoever the they are in this they obviously care about you. And it is difficult when those that care about us have ideas that have the potential to derail us even more. They mean well, and they might be right about the lines, however only you know the time to draw them ... they cannot and should not be forced. Corner a wild animal and someone is going to get hurt! Anyway, back to the poem .... it is brilliant xx
Thanks Tina, it's so kind if you to trawl through my misery...and I am...a miserable bitch these days lol...hugs Xx
Lol! The thing is, you write so damned well. Your words are woven brilliantly. I think they should be put in a book. Perhaps the book could include things about Judd's life — snippets and photos and things — which will make the poetry sing even louder — a kind of tribute book. Just my thoughts. Your work is outstanding!! Xx
Ah love..you are so kind...you really are. Mostly I can't even do the washing these days let alone write a book and you know what Tina...as massive and life changing and devastating as this is to me and my family...people lose someone precious every second. It is an age old story love isn't it. Who wants to hear it. I broke my heart at those 4 little children on the news from that fire Tina. How how how could you ever put a tiny child in the ground?? How would you ever survive?? Now...please go off and have the best Christmas EVER ok 😊💕
Those 4 little angels...bless their little souls 🙏🙏🙏🙏 xx
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