Poem -
" EDEN'S REPTILE "
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At first I ate fruit
Then, I couldn't eat a thing
Waiting for you to taste the forbidden...
I tried slitheringly to tempt you
If you'd only listened to Adam sing
This world's evil would've remained hidden
You two Angels begging
I tattooed my tongue's hissing
Riding the passenger seat to your new Hell
I polished the Apple tempting
I splayed the lies you'd been missing
The sex you'd have was enough to compel
The sexy bite
To make me Lord and Master
Over your new Hell
In Heaven's History book
I'm remembered
As,
Eden's Reptile...
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
Can you guess my name!!!
Mark!!!!!.~ you're so dam cool !!..........you have this way of doing the comments that no one else will do...........you're like a poetic shape-shifter............love your comments my friend!!.........I think we should talk some time...........gotta run.........thanx for this brother!!..........T xo
WOWZER... YOU TOO TONY ARE WRITING SUCH AWESOME PIECES...YOU TELL A TALE SO REAL YA FEEL AS THO YOUR THERE....EXCELLENT MY VOTE HUGS & XXX,S .I,LL TAKE A BIG SEXY BITE OF THAT APPLE .....LOL
Thanx TRACY!!!...........hey you can have a bite girlfriend!!...........just name the time and place...........and I will show up with a fruit basket!! (lol!).............that was a pretty amazing comment Tracy ~ truly appreciated!!............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
This is Really deep, and yet short in length, I felt it, the bite, the apple, okay, that is enough.................
if you know what I mean.
Best Wishes,
Nancy
I know what you mean Nancy!! (smiles)...........it's always good to hear when someone says that they could "feel it!".........Yay!!...........thanx so much my friend.............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Awesome T, my favorite part of the bible is genesis and the story of Adam and Eve in the garden of eden. Love how this is written from the tempting snake's perception. Well done on this one the title tempted me to read this. Much love to you brother.
Wassup D!?..........Genesis is the part of the Bible that I know best as well...........I think it's because of all those movies about Moses etc.........it was definitely a different writing experience, writing from the snake's perspective............thanx for this bro!!............Ttyl.............T xo
Hey t I love the perspective from the snakes point of view. The crazy thing is that God told them they could have fruit except from the tree of life . Men are gullible when a woman hands them a piece of fruit for sure especially since they knew in their mind it was the wrong thing to do . Cheers on a great write bro . Rock
Hey Rock!!.........you're funny...........I guess men ARE somewhat gullible when it comes to women,,,,,,,,,,,thanx a lot for taking some time with this bro..........appreciate it !!............Love and Rockets!!.........T xo