Edge of the World
I straighten your picture on my wall
The one I took last summer
With that old Nikon I still have
Your smile is beautiful
But your eyes have that faraway look
I look at you in that photograph
But you look straight through me
To who knows where
Perhaps that place on the edge
Of the world where you now are
I close my eyes and try
To reach out to you
But I feel nothing in return
I see you there
On the edge of the world
Looking straight through me
~RH~
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Highly imaginative poem, it's a dramatic monologue. The duality is very important, one is body with life, the other one is soul, a lot of interpretation ...........well done.
sayed thangal
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This is tragic but seems to have a sense of hope to it as well. A quite enjoyable read