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(Ego Based)

(Ego Based)

A Speculative Analysis her regressive demeanour was made subject to,
Non existent divinity proclaimed she, like a healthy Menu’s not so freshly frozen stew.
A rationale well built went behind this introspection,
Embracing Ego as our lethal carrier could save us from self deception.

——Calibration——
Mountains were cleft asunder by her appearance she thought,
Loved her self absorbed demonic solitude, amiable invasiveness she never sought.
 
She symbiotically thrives the study further revealed,
Amongst the ones most evolved  ,at cellular level of soul.
“Fully concealed”
Portrayed as Self respect  holding an arsenal of this wholly hollow set of principles,
Well fed she becomes, with a morbid obesity undeniable.

The outcome of this research is left upto readers,
Its truly your call if u make ur ego starve or become its breeders.
Ego based ‘perspectives’ suffer manipulative duality, 
Ask your Ego based foundation where is my originality?? 

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ps the title is kind of hidden ( as i put it in brackets) but cannot be really hidden. Just like EGO

 

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GREG TUCKER THE...

I like this it made me think.  I have to do that once in awhile.  However in this instance I had to ponder.  Very good job!  Charu You gave my brain a workout today LOL

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Charu Shaawd

Oh did i ?
Thank u very much Greg
your feedback is much appreciated 

much love ? ?

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Larry Ran

Dear Charu,

The Ego's favorite word is "Me"
It eschews other's points to see
In one ear, then out they flow
Infatuation with themselves e'er grows

Love,
Larry xxx
 

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Charu Shaawd

Beautiful! 
What an amazing expression,

Thank u so much Larry
much love ? 

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Syd

I'm not the sharpest tool in the box (at least not with my English skills) however I get the gist of this poem.

Basically take a good look at yourself once in a while. Question your motives. Are you doing things to help others or just for attention, to feed your Ego.

I could be a mile off but that's my interpretation.

I think I need a lie down now, my brain's aching lol.

Take care  - Syd 
 

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Charu Shaawd

Nailed it Syd 
Ego thrives in the form of self esteem in most and we dont realise it.What we think is the latter is actually the former. 

A mask of ego overshadows our real self.
 
Thank u so very much for stopping by and giving your valuable input
means a lot

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Wayne Stubbs

Absolutely love this piece!! Just had a quick look at your work, this has got to be a superb piece of antagonizing literature ?????

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u Wayne for taking the time to go through my expressions and leaving such humbling feedback..
really really appreciated ?

Warm regards
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Heer

Wow , you are really getting more amazing every time... Must admit had to read it another time to understand ... I was about to hit the sack and thought would sleep in minutes but I reckon this will keep me up for some more time now !

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Charu Shaawd

Thank u my darling , waiting for ur first write up
xxo

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