Poem -
Embracing you in my strong arms,
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I am your obedient, prettiest slave;
Dwelling in that celestial enclave.
Reading your curves on your palms,
Allow me to recite your holy psalms;
Embracing you in my strong arms,
Allow me to dwell in your dreams
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BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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I am your obedient, prettiest slave;
Dwelling in that celestial enclave.
Reading your curves on your palms,
Allow me to recite your holy psalms;
Embracing you in my strong arms,
Allow me to dwell in your dreams
Welcome love,
flowing streams,
Daylight break,
suns breathless take ,
Only breathing,
within loves dreams .
Enslavement thy holy hours,
Enlightened highest towers,
Strong arms to hold thee tight,
Forbidden morning light.
my contributions, with love xx
Fine example of (2) poets united together, in order to create a perfect storm and that, both of you truly has...It's not about who contributed more are whose poem it is, it's all about being able to produce and both parties being receptive in their production....Poetry is about being able to experiment, with the many words, that we have filled within the head and the ability to construct something presentable, not only to the creators but for all the many readers on this site as well......Which is precisely, what you both have added to the credits, of your talented skills....Thank you Nardine, for the positive exchange you and brother Williamji allowed to exist, through your honest and well fitted extension of the original poem...You both did in this poem, what was in question many moons ago, whether (2) poets/poetess, could write and both agree on the finale results and brother Williamjis response, (in his below comment),says it all
Sincerely,
Jimmy
Dear Poetess Nardine,
A beautifully tailored lyrics of love, Thanks a lot,
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear friend sir Williamsji, very welcome, much love and respect to you sir nardine xoxo
Job well done, Dear Lady.........
Jim
Dear Nardine Sanderson,
I wish to give you a title : An Angel Poetess of Light. God bless, Let the rainfall of love be from our Grand Master be upon you and your family,
My Love and all Respect to you as a Good Poetess in our COSMO site
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear friend sir Williamsji, what an honouring title, from a beautiful heart, you are an adoring soul sir, much love and appreciation Nardine Sanderson xoxo
Dear Nardine,
You said it, " from a beautiful heart .." Many cross's s carried in life, Many obstacles had overcome. Now no parents, lonely, empty, This is why I am writing, I want to be a strong writer, Also, I want to make others " good writer's " I will do anything for them,
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
You are a strong writer dear friend sir Williamsji, you have. Grown in writing the time I've been here, your kindness and passionate heart, indeed inspires many here to grow stronger too, we all learn from one another, like peas in a pod, we grow together xox sorry your lonely sir, your parents would be proud of the way you handle yourself, everything you create, keep going forward, much love and respect nardine xoxo
A lovely piece S W, short but very sweet. Love G xx
Dear Georgina,
Thanks for your sacred love and affection, Keep reading, Life is short, try to catch up with the new writings, You are soul of beauty and love,
Love to you dear Poetess
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Really love this poem, my brother and your heart, continues to grow stronger as each day pass, just as your feelings for both parents....Honestly speaking, when you hurt, (so do we).....
Your Brother,
Jim
Dear Sir Jim Arnold Jim Sir (My Brother)
I really understand your love dear brother, Thanks for your comments.
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
(Your Brother)