Poem -
Emotions
sometimes tears trickle down my heart,
like ants climbing a fountain,
minds still puzzle you,
should i live like a leaf
allowing nothing decide,
or should life be my shoes
and me my feet,
then everything decides,
life is just a story,
love is a page,
heart is the victim,
tigers are nothing but spots,
If only hearts were producers,
then tears would smile,
and pain would joy
there love dies,
For emotions are just limitations,
and life is only a city of minds
and mind is nothing but your interpretation.
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Comments
an unseen treasure really great poem I am amazed no one has said anything
Yes Marcus same here, probably its a bit complex to understand... am glad i wrote this poem .
Drunkenwolf,
thanks a lot for the advice, i just figured that out too,
Thanks.
A very thought provoking poem, poetist pepper....Emotions are limitations bestowed upon the life of mankind and by who God are ourselves? Some Native Americans Indians, seem to think, when they die, that heaven to them, will be returned, in the form, of them returning to earth and reliving the best experience and time, they had in life,while living, (thus being their heaven on earth) and those that were meant to go to hell, will have been cast back into the worse experience they had faced in life,(thus being their hell).Their beliefs is some what, a little orthadoxed to believe, that their exist no heaven above are hell down below, and that we create our own, here on earth...As for me, hope this isn't the case in the end and for right now, the conventional way,(heaven above and hell down below), will always remain my beliefs ..... Lines of interest as follows...
life is just a story,
love is a page,
heart is the victim,
tigers are nothing but spots,
If only hearts were producers,
then tears would smile,
and pain would joy
there love dies,
For emotions are just limitations,
and life is only a city of minds
and mind is nothing but your interpretation.....
Jim
Respect Jim,
Your comment is deep, I do agree with you, every tribe and individual have different believes about heaven and hell or life after death.i remember my brother telling as a kid that each human being is a drop of water from a bigger water, here the bigger water is God and the drops of water refer to human beings, thus the drops of water are mini God.
I think emotions are what makes man special and different from other beings .
Well there is still no factual prove of the existence of heaven or hell, just like our thoughts are alive but cant be seen , so is heaven and hell... life is a mystery.
I am glad that you read my poem and also have lines of interest, you are an idol to me , i love your poems and am often speechless each time i read your poems,thanks a lot.
Respect,
Pepper.
Favorite Curtis,
It makes me smile to know that you enjoy reading my poem and that its not boring, yes my talent is natural and inherited , i don't really think i have a style or rules to writing i just write when i feel like or want to, no restrictions or rules, but nature always has her way of doing things.
I love your poems to, you have a great skill, i sometimes wonder what inspires you to write on the themes you write on ? quite curious.
Appreciation,
Pepper.
Great write dear Poetess Pepper, My applause, My vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
A superb piece P` well written and it flowed beautifully. Welcome to Cosmo honey and I`m looking forward to reading your work. You are a very talented poet. Well done sweety. Love G xx
Hi Gina,
Thanks for the welcome i really appreciate it, your comment is a motivation to me, i am about to check out your work as well am sure you are a legend in whatever you do...
Love,
Peppeh.
Dearest Williams,
That paragraph has a lot to say,sometimes i think that maybe life is a story and love is only a page, however people think love takes a bigger portion of this story which i disagree with , i think emotions are only a distraction to man, it distracts man from our main purpose on the planet.however LOVE is beautiful but is probably just an illusion.
Thanks '
Pepper.
Dear Pepper,
It is a nice subject to discuss, LOVE is beautiful but is probably just an illusion.
Contrary to the composition referenced in all our most wanted love songs, love (as with every other emotion we feel) is not rooted in the heart but in the brain. By better understanding how the brain falls in love, we can learn about why the brain can get so obsessed with this powerful emotion. In fact, some experts even see love as a kind of addiction. For instance, n euro-scientists had earlier discovered that monogamous pair bonding has its basis in the same brain reward circuits that are responsible for addiction to drugs. Their study was conducted in the prairie vole, a small rodent that mates for life. But the conclusions are probably true for humans, too, which may explain why it is so hard to break up a long-term romantic relationship. Losing someone you love is like going through many withdrawals
Thanks and regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dearest Williamsji,
This subject is very interesting , the fact that we all forget to understand is that the heart that we all say is in love doesn't feel ant emotion, the heart is just a blood pumping organ,unlike what our famous....songs, and other writings say, this shows how convincing and free poetry is ,poetical license....
I do believe what you said about love being rooted in the brain and not the heart, because it is the brain that processes everything concerning every human, i have never heard of the heart doing that job...
Its funny to think that our center of discussion doesn't even have a physical form or prove , it just exists in individual mind, i always wonder what love truly is... and i end up saying its just an illusion.
Someone please tell me what love actually is ...
Curiously,
Pepper.
Dear Pepper,
An excellent theme or topic to discuss further.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI
It truly is, Williamji....
...
Curiously,
Pepper.
One word, funky :) xoxo
Why funky,
Dearest nardine,
Curiously,
Pepper.