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Empirically Pure Empathy

Empirically Pure Empathy

She's pure empathy
In everything she knows and does
Like, pristine winter snows
Laid evenly across
All she touches,
In Love's every moment,
Such universal shaping
The tinpantithesis of caring, and quiet sway
She's more magical than the snows
Quietly comforting,
The peaks of Kilimanjaro,
She's in everything ~ she's empirically proven
For she truly Loves all things in life
She's the wisdom inside,
Shooting straight through
Despair and strife,
She heals
With the gentle touch of knowing
A gift, provable
A birthright,
An all encompassing, spiritual Love
In her eyes,
The divine lights of knowing,
She can help you cry
And then, have you walk away
Glowing,
She's a heavenly blessing
It's so easy to see,
She's the living manifestation,
Of
Empirically Pure,
Empathy...

for: Cherie

Tony Taylor

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Wilford Barker

Master T... Up up and away.. This is a hard hitter.. Talking about connected... So much to digest in this write.. I am going to chew on the again and again.. I will like to call this one.. QUITE STORM.. Liked,Pinned, and a handful of stars my teacher friend.. Blessings..

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Tony Taylor

Yes!! Thanx SIR BARKER!!...... appreciate the enthusiastic reception of this piece my friend..... it's been a work in progress!!....... pretty cool that you came up with a name of your own...... always a pleasure brother poet!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.  ?

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Richard Waters

Exquisite write dedicated to conveying the truth of a relationship and what a love really means to you !

Warmest wishes to you.

Take care,  :)  Hug.

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Tony Taylor

Hey Thanx SIR WATERS!!..... this one I've been working on for quite some time...... could never seem to get it quite right....... appreciate the support my good man!!....... smiles .......LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo.  ?

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Deborah Evans

Hi Tony A  beautiful dedication write to Cherie
showing the person she is through your 
eyes her caring empathetic and loving nature 
I loved these lines so beautiful

"The tinpantithesis of caring, and quiet sway
She's more magical than the snows
Quietly comforting,
The peaks of Kilimanjaro,"

It does the heart good to read yours and Cherie`s 
poetry to each other,to know a love like this
can happen My old granddad used to say 
when two people are in love One should compliment each other 
for it to work and be happy. You show this here in this lovely poem, as Cherie
does with hers to you
Sorry for rambling :-)
Beautiful poetry A pleasure to read 
Love n hugs Debs xo
 
 

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Tony Taylor

YAY!!! ~Thanx DEBS!!!.....I knew you'd have  one of your awesome comments for this one!!......I Love that you pointed out those particular lines...... did you know that "tinpantithesis" is a word that Edgar Allen Poe invented to make one of his poems work!?..... always loved it and found a great place for it here........ so happy you liked it because you...... above all others..... know the ins and outs of writes in the Love arena...... always appreciate your ink sister girl!!........thanx again..... for being you my friend!!..........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.  ?

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Alex Kobza

That was beautiful and felt from the heart, good emotion.

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Tony Taylor

Thanx ALEX!!...... appreciate the positive ink brother poet.......LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo.  ?

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RRG (Rebecca)

So very lovely and a wonderful tribute to a sweet girl. :) Beautiful ink Tony. Hugs Rebecca

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Tony Taylor

Thanx for taking time with this one Rebecca....... always appreciate your positive ink girlfriend!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?

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Tony Taylor

Thanx LISA!!...... you're the grooviest!!....... smiles......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?

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Paula Lee Perry

Wow! This has a magical beauty all in itself and of itself. Mercy Tony this one is beyond good poetry. Thank you for penning it, and for sharing it with all of us out here in Cosmo World! I have to pin this one! In fact, I believe it is among my favorites of those I have read. Nice job! Phenomenal expression! Enjoyed it much.      Paula

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Tony Taylor

Cool!!~ Thanx PAULA!!......I love that you liked it enough to PIN it!!....... some will blaze right through this write without catching the "Key Word"... Empirical...... meaning scientifically proven...... once you've got that...... the whole write becomes what I intended...... took Cherie a few to catch that....... so glad you were on to me (so to speak).......Thanx again for the kind support my friend......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  ?

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GoneButNotforgotten

Why do couples feel the need to have to post on media sites to prove to the world that they are happy and lovable and worthy and attractive. In other words, there seems to be little appeal in constantly writing updates about their relationship. Their joy should be in being together, not in posting about their intimate thoughts and feelings & posting for others to see about being together

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GoneButNotforgotten

Just my point of view friend...It's not the poetry in and of itself...because I find the poetry exquisite, beautiful, inspirational, with far, far too many artful adjectives  to list...The conundrum I find difficult to absorb are the very personal comments made on the poetry between those and their lovers... that in my opinion should be left to private messages, emails, telephones, one on one and etc. etc.

It seems to have somewhat of a soap opera effect and a bit of voyeurism to them. I remember when Hardrocklover (Bradford) was left in the dust. How embarrassed and sad he must have felt, so much so, that he left for awhile. My heart ached fort him. That's what I'm referring to, if the comments were personal messages, he may have not felt so intimidated.

It's all seems a bit sophomoric and adolescent when personal comments could be left in personal messages, in person, or on the tele. rather then public from all to see. Yes this site is kind of like a family between certain members. Even more so to try and avoid humiliating those who have felt the bitter sting of being left and replaced by another.

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Deborah Evans

For goodness sake GoneButNotForgotten leave it go it is not your 
business to comment on any relationship on here, only on 
the poetry which you say you like, now your commenting on comments which 
to my mind has basically got nothing to do with you or anyone else only the people involved
Are you one of those trolls who go around trying to demean people because to my mind
you sure are having a good go at Cherie and Tony.  Your comments are  uncalled for and i say to you,
you are the one who is acting sophomoric and creating drama and you are humiliating yourself  by writing
such comments, Get on with your own life read the poetry write your poetry leave critiques and comments
treat Cosmo with respect it is a friendly poetry site with people enjoying writing  and reading poetry stories 
and seeing art it is not a place to slight  anyone`s relationship Not your business remember that before you
take the moral high ground Glide on love my friend just my point of view ........

 

 

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Tony Taylor

DEBS!!..... you are so beautiful!!........ inside and out........ big, fat, HUGZ!!.......T ?

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Deborah Evans

Aww Tony and Cherie  its fine I did`nt want
to fetch it to your attention, I thought it childish
and gave my point of view , you are both my friends
I love it here at Cosmo and don`t like to see  things like this
Love and hugs to you both Debs xox 

 

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Rose Sho

How in God's name did I miss all this?!!!.....Wow!!....very interesting....I've read personal peoms and exchange between lovers here on Cosmo and to be frank I've learned so much from them.

Gonebutnotforgotten....you'd have inboxed your personnal opinion to Cherie and Tony if you had issues with their exchange rather than embarassing yourself the way you did....The Cosmo family is  filled with friends who go personal with each other....If you're not comfortable with it then "skip" rather than displaying you ignorance which you just did. The fact that Bradford had his experience doesn't mean others shouldn't live their lives.

Tony and Cherie...I admire you both...and what you share is sacred...I pray for a beautiful future filled with so much love happiness and bliss....Ride on....don't be discouraged...Keep them coming!

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