Poem -

A Moment of Enlightenment

After spending
almost
forty years,
staring
at the same old
stone wall,
waiting for
enlightenment ..
Suddenly it
dawned on him ..
He had been
well and truly
zenned ..
A long time ago ..

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Being Me

A stonewall can be interesting to look at. Cracks and lumps and birds and plants and bees and colours. Depending on how you perceived those things is key to the wall being either just a wall, or an eco system, or a piece of art work etc.

If that stonewall is a psychological one ... that's a whole different thing. Interesting in a very different way.

Another fab poem, my friend x

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Neville

I am delighted you alighted & were so magnificently insighted x

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author
Jim "The Lad" ....

write on! oh wise one!..................................................................................Jim

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author
Neville

too kind Jim & truly .. but thank you regardless .. Neville :)Β 

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Marion

Ah...enlightenment is overrated I think...being zenned sounds like much more fun 😁😊

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Neville

It is Marion .. you just gotta try it .. enlightenment can wait .. x

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Marion

You know what...I think I might have already been zenned a few times myself...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† on a serious note I really dont think it is possible to find enlightenment while we breathe, only our perception of it...if we are lucky...very lucky...I'm sticking with the zen thingy πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š...yea, I'm in an emoji mood...sorry x

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Neville

How luverly is that .. you lucky bugga .. N x

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