Poem -
Enlightenment
Never give up because as a whole its our task to reach our goal, through all the good and the bad its not for humans to continue to be sad. Continue in your life don't give up the fight follow your instincts and you'll be right. Bring happiness and love to people you meet, but also be aware of the words that they speak. Stay true is what i'm saying to you so brighter days will come along and the things that got you down will eventually be gone
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Hey HAYLEY!!..... This is a VERY compelling write ~ positivity flowing throughout.......a strong sense of rhythm and timing here.......I do think that this would be even more effective if you broke your lines differently, adding a formatting that helps the reader (just a suggestion ~ please don't take this the wrong way).......I am VERY curious to read more of your stuff...... well done....... and in case no one has said it yet.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.........T xo