Poem -
Enlightment
Twenty years old but I feel like a newborn,
My vision has never been so clear
The air has never smelled so crisp
The trees were dancing to the beat of the earth
The heat rushed to my toesÂ
The cold rushed to my head
I laid on my paddle boardÂ
And she took me away
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Comments
Where did this come from?!?! Very nice!!!! :)
Thank you very much ! It came out of nowhere
Very very nice
Hello Poet Friend,
A new great talent has joined us on Cosmo. Our hearts were dancing to the beat of your beautiful prose. Welcome to our family!
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hey there Larry!
I never realized that my words could generate such good feedback. Honestly, I didn't even know what a prose was. I had to google the definition, but it's pretty awesome to think that happen by accident.
I appreciate your comment and hopefully this poem can enlighten those around us, so that we can all live in peace, love, and harmony.
Nicole xo
Thanks for the wisdom on this beautiful day. 7/25/16