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Enter, God lives inside

That's what the sign said
enter,where could I find God
inside,inside where?
inside my heart and my soul
God resides you can't see him
but he's there ,I talk,walk, and live with 
God,he walks, talks,with me.

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Katina Woodruff...

 I liked how you began the poem. A little spacing and editing may be needed to make it read better. 

"but he's there..." after this line, you could create a space to make it stand out a little more. I would also capitalize the But, he's there. 

Example: Just an idea. 

But, he's there. 
I talk
walk 
and live 
with God. 

I'm going through your list of poems. I'm intrigued. 

Thanks for sharing your poem and your faith. :) 
 

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Angel

Nice thought angel thanks for reading and commenting angel

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