Poem -
Entity
Birth and death inevitable in the wheel of life
I died when I was born out of your womb,
Each seconds I died in eternal bliss,
And my rebirth imminent after my death....
Should i be in this cycle of death and life?
Smashing this chain of circuit a new desire...
Brewing within me since i entered in this nullity
A devotion towards the vast expanse of nonentity.
Judgement ruled this plane of existence
Is advertising this emptiness a devotion?
Fell in the abyss of my primordial emotion
Challenged to float in this cataclysm of fidelity...
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Poetess Piusha Singh
Another stream of your beautiful poem, Thanks and congrats for sharing.
READING BETWEEN THE LINES: This is a big question mark in life. This line of yours is very thought provoking . Our own self esteem has to be revived. Being constantly criticized by family, friends, and society tends to slowly strip us of our feelings of self worth. Our low self esteem strips us of the self confidence to make even the smallest of decisions. Improving self esteem increases your confidence and is a first step towards finding happiness and a better life !
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI
Thnxxx williamsji.
All the possibilities of life, death and the,( what ifs), in the inbetweens, all wrapped up in one, in this poem Piusha and you delivered it very philosophical and with the intent, of the reader to come to terms with and draw, his/ her own conclusions of which came first,(birth are death are visa versa) in present life time, before and beyond....Another style you may call free when spoken but valuable to ears of the reader when heard told.....Job well done...
Warmest regards,
Jim
OOH dear Jim,I am honoured to get a review from you. And I love to write were the reader should also involve in my thoughts.It thrills me when I get a positive response.And you know this means a lot to me as a writer .And thnxxx a million for your kind support.
Cheers
Piusha...xxx
Hello dear lady,
You are quite welcome and in this one, i felt a whole lot of thinking about life and where do we go from here ,(from you), scenario....A wonderful job....
Warmest regards as always,
Jimmy Arnold
Thnxxx Jim for your kind support.And it was written about some situations in my life..
Love
Piusha