Thought locked in a
Vulture circle
Threatening my
Trembling Self
Security
Paralysis
Reaches out to grasp my
Throat
Entrapped within my
Mind I
Am besieged by
Fear from all
Directions
Thanks. ☺ This is about all those times I think myself into corners, becoming caged by a situation that only exists inside my mind... although I can see how the sentiment can apply to an unhealthy relationship as well
I really like short punchy lines, this is a great write, days i feel like thus i usually explode, but nowadays instead of trashing me flat or somones face i go to the gym and use a punch bag...am sure the punch bags winning tho :)
IMO i dint think you need to ccapitalise every new lline, but is a tiny thing compared to a very powerful write
Sadly, when I am upset, I tend to internalize, unlike you. I'm sure your way of dealing with things is much healthier.
About my tendancy to capitalize every new line... I never really thought about it, it's just something I've always done. Maybe I should try doing things differently. :)
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Hi Vikki I have lived this life been from my last marriage trapped with no way out and fear was dominating my every step . Great write hrl
Thanks. ☺ This is about all those times I think myself into corners, becoming caged by a situation that only exists inside my mind... although I can see how the sentiment can apply to an unhealthy relationship as well
I really like short punchy lines, this is a great write, days i feel like thus i usually explode, but nowadays instead of trashing me flat or somones face i go to the gym and use a punch bag...am sure the punch bags winning tho :)
IMO i dint think you need to ccapitalise every new lline, but is a tiny thing compared to a very powerful write
Nice :)
thank you!
Sadly, when I am upset, I tend to internalize, unlike you. I'm sure your way of dealing with things is much healthier.
About my tendancy to capitalize every new line... I never really thought about it, it's just something I've always done. Maybe I should try doing things differently. :)
Be well
- Vikki