Poem -
Envisioned in my mind
Envisioned in my mind a Man without a face dreams portrayed the scene of the murder case
reality was reflected by the dreams that filled my night
and although they say dreams are fake this one rewinded my life
chills up and down my spine
like a broken record the dreams played all the time
I was only 16 years old when this disaster was done
the only way to ID the man was the prints on his thumb
The details I didn't get to know
on his casket a picture showed
I sat on the witness stand to say my final piece
the only Justice I got was he'll never be released
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Beautiful and deep xx
welcome to Cosmo!....................................................................................Jim
Thanks so much
Hello Amber!!......an engaging piece of poetic prose......you can find the poetic tempo mixed in at times......perhaps a different formatting would make it clearer to the reader.......I like the narrative aspect of it....it has a compelling story line.......but most of all it has a very powerful sadness to its overall intent that is well delivered ~
~ "Envisioned in my mind a man without a face
Dreams portrayed the scene of the murder case..."
A VERY strong opening!!.....ALL STARS!!......well done.....and....WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Hi great honesty.
About the law and fighting for justice
Thank you.
the law is not easy for the victims who have to repeat, quite a huge feat so I stand and clap for you.
And nod in agreement two.
They call it a witness stand for a reason.
You stood Tall.
I'm glad you liked it, it still is hard but I'm glad I was able to get on the stand and say my piece
So sorry sweet
screw the poetry
daddy done you wrong
make it write
My dad got killed, but before he got murdered he was all messed up
Deep and honestly real. Welcome to Cosmo x