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EQUAL

We are born unequal
We live unequal
We die unequal
But deathΒ 
Does not care
It takes us all
To the same place
Over there
Cold
In the ground
Under a stone
All alone
Death
Marion Price
(2018)

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Angel

But after death is eternity with God and those who have passed alreadyΒ 
loved ones and the prophets of old onto a new beginning in heavenΒ 
no more crying or pain just the Lord and his angels and a mansionΒ 
with the Lords outstretched hands remember life is in an eye blink but we can be certian that God exists how do I know this I have prayed and soughtΒ 
God's face and he has made a way in my life as he does for everyone
who calls upon his name .

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Marion

Angel..this is meant to express the inequality of our physical selves and physical lives...that death makes us all equal... that we all end up rotting in the ground...regardless of who or what we are in life, our acheivments or our possessions. Beautiful, ugly, rich or poor we will all end up rotting in the ground. What happens after that none of us know for sure, and that is where our own personal faith and beliefs comfort us. Take care, thanks for reading xx

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Marion

Angel...it is just a verse, it is not necessarily my view for though I do not believe in one god, I know there is more than we can see and that we exist after death and there are other realms. This is just one take on death. Thankyou for reading and commenting, I admire your great faith...truly...xx

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!.... what a perfectly beautiful poetic offering!!.......this is one of my favorite poems EVER!!.... so BEAUTIFULLY honest and succinctly profound!!...... the truth being... we are ALL equal in God's eyes!!.....PINNED!! ~ for perfection!!......a GREAT write MARION!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ❀

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Marion

Thankyou Tony for your, as always beautiful words and unequaled support, you really are a very generous and lovely man, I can tell by the way you comment and give confidence to everybody...hugs xx

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Marion

Thankyou so much Kieran, appteciΓ ted xx

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Marion

And thankyou also poetess my friend xx

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