Poem -
Eternal Embrace
My love, if we die tomorrow
I don't want the cold clay to separate our bones
I still want to feel the softness of your dark hair against my cheeks
In our slumber of life's last eternal embrace
I want to feel your breath escaping to mingle with my own
Until the day's final light stretches across the vast expanse
From life into death's empty forest
I will hold your bones with mine
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Hey ROSS!!.... this is a VERY well delivered pledge to love's endless aspirations...... and it's delivered in gorgeous poetic prose....... and highlighted with a strong sense of rhythm and timing in its delivery!!....... great dΓ©but piece here........ALL STARS....... well done brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Tony, thank you for the kind sentiments and thank you for the warm welcome. Its nice to have so many talented people collaborating and exchanging thoughts and compliments.
I haven't had a chance to look at anyone else's work yet but I will take a moment very soon to do that.Β
Thanks again brother poet!
Hi Ross IΒ thought this write was beautifulΒ
an undying love taken to the grave
Great write Best wishes DebsΒ Β
Thank you Deborah.Β
Wonderful write, I hope to read more of your work
Thank you PoetessDarkly
More to follow...
very sweet, love it!
Kind regards
Caron
Thank you Caron.
wow, this is superb, Ross, reads like a winner in this here promotional 'contest' likingΒ a lot, my friend...tribute