Poem -
~ EVER LIGHT ~
To not have consideredย
The nature of thought
Is a sin
A declaration
Against the universal tide
And the movement of nature
As silvery moments
That define
The very natureย
Of our unnaturalness...
Our reality is a falsity
A momentary torment passed to our minds
As a testament to our momentariness
Our minor contributionย
To our foreverness
A simplistic movementย
In universality,
A glimpse through the veil,
An amazing trail,
That magnificently reveals
Our "Ever-Light"....
Tony Taylor
Just thinking...
Dedicated to Marion Price
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Comments
So true Tony. Beautiful โ๏ธย
JP
such a lovely sentiment. well written piece
VERY INTERESTING POETRY LINDA
Why do you writeย Tony Taylor
Hmmmmm??....Iย never really thought about it..... I simply have always written......makes me feel something I suppose....when most of the world leaves me kind of numb!!.......thanx for the inquiry dear poet!!....I appreciate it......no one has ever asked me that before......kinda cool!!......Peace...T xo
Most amazing sir Tony .. and I seriously & truly mean that .. Oh' and I also think your dedication could not have been more appropriately assigned .. I am sure it will be most gratefully received .. Neville :)ย
God Tony...that you have dedicated a poem to me is mindblowing...such an honour from such a fabulous poet and thinker like yourself. Thankyou. โคย ย
While the whole verse is amazing it is in the lines below that you have clarified what it is that eats away at me...
'As silvery moments
That define
The very nature
Of our unnaturalness'...
our unnaturalness...exactly.
Thankyou so much dear friend...it is so good to have you back...hugs x
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YAY!!!!...I'm soooo glad you found something in the words......I thought about it before writing it....and sincerely hoped you wouldn't say something
like.....What the hell is THAT supposed to mean....i really wrote it after reading one of your pieces and thought "this is crazy"...that you're still wrestling with the hurt......i apologize for the late reply.....just getting it all together in my life at this point......it's good to be back my friend!!
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย Lots of Love!!......T xo
PS. you're one of my favorite things to ponder!!......smiles!!
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I'm so glad you're feeling better Tony and I really appreciate your write...am touched and honoured my friend. There is no great mystery to me Tony, the unexpected death of my son/ best friend/ soulmate / commradeย triggered an ongoing depression in me...one I will never get over as I can never make friends with...his 'goneness'. It also triggered a crazy need to find him...to search out any truths about gods, our beginnings...if souls exist etc etc etc. You see...the world I thought I knewย exploded when he died and I no longer believe any 'good god' would put families through such horrendous trauma. When you have children they become your life...it is impossible to drop them by the wayside and...that ridiculous phrase...'move on'. I think if you spoke to grieving families my situation is not so very uncommon. The only thing that brings me temporary release is to write it...I have long stopped socialising with people. I know your own mam has her own experiences and I applaud that she is a stronger lady that I. For me it is impossible he is gone at such a young age and for me...there is no place to move on to. Hugs and best wishes lovely man x
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Hi Tony, I loved this, really thought provoking,ย
I'm glad I stopped by
Hope you are well
Loveย
Lorna xx
Brilliant!ย Brilliant as a dedication to/for Marion AND as a stand alone poem in its own right. Clever, classy writing x
Thank you young lady!!......Very much appreciated!!......you're too kind!!....T LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo
A " Silvery Moment " Indeed!!!!ย
INDEED brother!!......sometime!!.....T xo
Great Poem Tony. Message meย
Greg
Tony, Tony, Tonyย
long time no hearย
This is so beautiful ๐ย
hugs,
Leah