Every Word
It was said, " cannot read a sealed book",
But I can help release what the demons took!
The life blood of spiritual paradise,
Commanding their minions to think twice!
By every word shall destiny tremble!
Righteous works; found in a thimble!
Watch, as the mighty boulder released!
Crushes demons; and their booty fleeced!
Making paths straight; as it rolls forth!
Glory revealed; from the land north.
No unhallowed hand; can counter or stay!
The mountain that moves; all in its way!
The whole earth; and the wicked fates,
Will reel! from what came forth of gold plates.
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What a write Jim , I loved the rhyme scheme and the image pouring out with the way this reads makes it feel like it’s just all falling down below right until the end  . Superb readÂ
Thank you Rob! for the compliment and assessment appreciate your words and support!
Wowsas brilliant imagery throughout using your amazing vivid imagination... abfab Jim my lad 💕💙💕
thank you my fab friend! it's not all imagination.
wonderful poemÂ
thank you Greg!
Clever right Jim. “Crushes demons; and their booty fleeced!” what a line ! Great wording throughout and you kept the flow so well tooÂ
Gwen, thank you so much for reading and your compliment!
Great write Jim👍🏼
you can't take that back JP! I'll take great and run with it! means a lot JP thank you!
Such an awesome poem Jim, I love your lyrical style, it gets me every time. Enjoyed the imagery in this one, greatly accompanied by the picture.Â
glad you connected with it and that you like the lyrical value! thank you Max my friend!
A very well written piece Jim. Great rhyming, flow and imagery. I can tell there is a lot of thought and belief hone into this poem.
Enjoyed - SydÂ
I am so glad you enjoyed Syd! I'm am trying to manage health as best I can and hope you are improving!
thanks for reading and support Baker Street!
Sorry Jim, I'm a little late to the party and I can see it's all been said above, brilliant write my friend x
wish it was as consistent as yours! thank you bunches Marion!
Hello Jim...
The way things are going I think God knows if He puts his feet up and rests we'll destroy our World ourselves...
God's patient and He knows just how greedy, reckless, selfish and destructible we are...
 God destroyed the World once...
I don't even think God needed a nap when it was done...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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thank you bunches sparrowsong! great to see you!
thank you Liliana my wonderful friend!
thank You Hj!
You have incorporated several very memorable lines throughout what is essentially in its own write, a most memorable posting .. and what an amazing Daliesque image you have used to introduce it .. Neville :)Â
A powerful write on display here Jim.
Real fire, brimstone and not forgetting wrath poured into the mix.
Emotions running deep and no holding back.
Potent Hand of God imagery served up.
And great to view a well crafted poem that makes one's heart beat faster when reading and after for that matter.
Thank you for doing so and for sharing my poetry brother and hope all is well with you and the loved ones around you :)
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