" EVIL LOVER, SUCCUBUS"
Love hates me for I am brash, and proud, alas
The formulated lemmings, jumping from the cliffs
Who try to make me run that way, can kiss my ass
For I was born an evil lover, I do not know of pain
For all I really care about is me, and, oh yes, me
I was never trained like you, I made "my bones" at age thirteen
Yes, I really killed a man, and in turn, he killed my heart
So yes, I am an evil lover, and proudly wear the mark
You cannot find me come the light, or at break of day
For I hunt in solitude, adorned in a dark shade of gray
Remember, when I stand above you, you staring up in horror
That I am enjoying the play, an actor with pure evil to convey
My pulse never elevates, even as your face is torn asunder
And I leave you cloven into a bloody heap, then sit down to dinner
I'm simply manifesting, your darkest dreams of me
A haunted man, haunting virginal eyes and ghastly lovers
I am the evil incarnation of man, I am your evil lover
You've prayed I'd never come, but indeed I do
As I wait for you in shadows, looking forward to emptying your soul
So I may suck in your final breath, and everything you control
It feels so good to taste real hate,
I am succubus...
Tony Taylor
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Hello Tony...
You kill me!
I have been contemplating on a couple of writes for a few days now...
One of them was similar in ways to this...
Halloween is coming...
Sometimes a day just isn't long enough?Β
Thank you for writing this...
You're The Man!
Hugz...
FeathersΒ
Hey FEATHERS!!......didn't mean to kill you!! (lol)........but I'm The Man!! ~ the man with the hoola- hoop!!.....thanx for calling me that!!.....you're so much fun......sorry I stepped on your idea but I think you should post it anyway......poetry is poetry.......and you have nothing to worry about ~ you're unique as hell.....Love your stuff!!.......thanx for this girlfriend!!........Love and Rockets!!......T xo
Hi Tony A really got to read to the end poemΒ
a gripping tale of the evil lover sounds Β scary too
and he sure has a cold heart which he lays blame on for his pastΒ
where he killed a man at the age of 13 IΒ surly would`nt want to meetΒ
him on a dark night. My imagination is running wild reading this lol
but i thoroughly enjoyed A Great read
Love n hugs Debs xo
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Hey Thanx DEBS!!.....it's so cool that it got your imagination running wild!! (lol)........Love those kinds of comments......funny what a poem can bring out in different readers........but I DID write it to be a little "sexy-dark" ~smiles.........thanx again for this!!..........high fives........T xo
Magnificent write as usual. Your poetry flourishes dealing with intense subject matter with ease.
Great.
All the best to you ! Β :)
Thanx SIR WATERS!!......the more intense.......the more challenging I find it!!.......thanx for noticing brother poet!!........high fives........T xo
:) Β Hug !
Holy S&%tΒ intense
WOW!! ~ MARK!!......thanx brother poet!!.......and I agree......wish they wouldn't have cut that off too!!.......such is life........appreciate it man!!.......T xo
Wish SUCCUBUS" wasnt cutΒ off title.........Great work
Wow Tony,
Succubus now comes disguised as a man, to suck the life out of the puerile pubic.Β The vestal virgin so naΓ―ve, sways to his every false proclamation of love, and then she invites him to her forbidden zone.Β As he enters, he thinks to himself, "Soon I will eat her alive".Β I have changed my sexual preference, but I am still "Succubus".
Peace, Love and Rockets, My Poetic Brother,
xox Larry
WOW! ~ Thanx LARRY!!...I swear sometimes your comments are better than my writes.......you have a knack for wielding words brother........appreciate it VERY much.....always makes me smile......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
so intense an awesome piece loved it Tony