Exploring Eternity
I dream the thick dream
With scant my reason, clawing are my fingers
As I fall deep into the thickness
To the empty eon in ruins
To the eternal abyss
To the universal black hole
Where time does not exist
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I fall as a glimmer
A memory, unmanifested
I take the dark dance
And move like the slow spider
So slowly, ever-testing the web of time
Though eternity eludes me
I aim my intent, with a piercing profanity
As I fall, deep, into the thickness
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It is here, I can feel it
The sleek movement of time
With its elusive arrogance prancing
With its minimal chance of understanding
As it toys with my mind's eye
Wrapped in blackened resistance
I fall deep into its lies
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I awaken so clean, so very six-thirty
I am empowered, inspired
I have found myself
Exploring eternity....
Tony Taylor
* a work in progress
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Tony, I like this one, a work in progress , you say ,so we can look forward to more Exploring Eternity ? That would be great. Thanks for a wonderful read.
Jenny.
Hey JENNY!!....I think I may just do that! ?......always a pleasure to see you on the pages dear poet sister!!.......thanx so much for reading!!.....hugs-n-smiles.......T xo ??✴✴❤?
Hi Tony , this is already perfect lol...But, I'm still looking forward to it.
great write..
hugs
Thanx for making me smile LEAH!!..... as always I appreciate your support and kindness..... stay groovy girlfriend!!....... cheers......T xo ??✴✴❤✴✴?
Hello Tony...
Work in progress...
You're so funny...
Awesome write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugz and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
LOL!!..... you're awesome FEATHERS!!......thanx so much for reading and seeing!!...... Love to you and yours!!...... your friend and admirer!!.....T xo ??✴✴❤❤?
:) Why not ?
You delve deep into the recesses of conscious and subliminal interpretation of the manifestations associated with the forever and everlasting in a way that understands love or physical design. Your rationale, though intricate in nature, belies simple belief born of truths divergence or variety. You cannot hide your concerns with spirituality or transition coming from transformations in states of existence.
You write with aplomb on the elements that influence life and understanding in a way which creates formulaic debate or irresistible convoluted dissection materializing from hard-bitten assertion !
Bravo !
Well written my friend.
Warmest wishes. :)
SIR WATERS!!..... as usual you honor me with insights and take keen observations into a place where comprehension and discussion are laid bare....... helping me to learn as I wade my way through those observations..... thank you SO MUCH for taking the time with this my friend......I am, as usual, more than grateful to you kind sir!........ your friend and admirer!......T xo ❤❤ ~ Love to you and yours!
:) You know it makes sense !! To delve deep into the psychological pool and immerse yourself within the stream of inquiring influences is important.
You are a capable poet dealing with it all, in your own way. I appreciate that. Take care my friend !
Hug.
And so he flips his switch back, and I must say, still awesome my friend! You manage to captivate my imagination from whatever you write about Tony! ??? ☮? brother! ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Wow! Such a deep write, that truly moved me. After ingesting your powerful words, I was inspired to write something, that would possibly answer some of the questions that I feel we all deal with.
Thank you for your brilliant thoughts.
Peace, Love, and The Universe,
Larry xxx