The Eyes of a Demon

~Written by Shirley Rebstock 8/8/2015 Picture by Fyrekithkanan~
As the young woman walked home late one evening
Little did she know, one gazed upon her with the eyes of a demon
Earily silent except for the sound of her high heels
Demon eyes watching, wondering how ravishing her body would feel
His evil thoughts full of lust
His sinful mouth salivating as under his breath he cussed
When she reaches this corner, her body I'll grab
If she attempts to scream, a knife in her chest I will stab
The closer she got, the faster his heart beat
His body trembling with excitement, anticipating this meet
Closer, closer, closer still
Rape, torture, then kill
The eyes of the demon gazed
The evil intentions of his mind, his conscience did not faze
Then the moment arrived
Two souls collide
Violently he muffled her scream
At first she thought this must be a dream
Then seeing in his hand a large knife
She knew she must fight to save her life
A loud bang, a bright flash in the dark
Through the shadows, she could see she hit her mark
She stood over his prone body as his life drifted away
The demon gaze in his eyes will no longer stay
Faded, gone, in the dirt where his dead body lay
There will come a day when this evil tale of lore
All demon eyes will be destroyed and exist no more
For now, let's be warned my friend
Beware of the demon eyes gazing, lusting for your life to end

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Comments
This was written for Sparrowsong's request for a Thriller Poem. In high school, I used to find Edgar Allen Poe's thrillers fascinating.
Hello Shirley...
Eyes of the Demon...
I was on the edge of my seat!
There will come a day when this evil tale of lore
All demon eyes will be destroyed and exist no more
For now, let's be warned my friend
Beware of the demon eyes gazing, lusting for your life...
GREAT ONE SHIRLEY!
Thank you for sharing...
I enjoyed Edgar also...
He was of a fascinating and mysterious mind...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
5* and fav
Thanks,definitely different to try to write a thriller
Wow!!
Thanks for reading
Hello Shirley...
How did it feel?
I came across like no troubles...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I enjoyed having my victim defeat the dangerous foe. Thanks for the opportunity to do something different.
wonderful exciting imagery. I'm glad the victim finally wins. :)
Me too, thanks for stopping by.