Eyes of Alice
Down at the backend of the garden
This years crop's done well,
Hung to dry, now to try
Welcome to natures spell.
There are spectrums of colour
That I like in my garden,
From different angles I peek
Various views, reds and blues
Berries keen birds' eyes seek.
I love dewey mornings, I do
I do I really really do,
With the start of the sun shine
To illuminate the prism balls of dew,
How they sparkle, light beams shine,
Psycodelic glow
It would be easy to believe in fairies
Danceing to the show.
Natures breath blows perfumes
From aromatic plants,
The heady mix is working
Now seeing fairies herding ants.
Looking deeper through the foliage
To spy the fairies palace
I had the feeling if I turned my gaze,
It would be into the eyes of Alice.
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Comments
Hi Β BydOnz Β Love this. The imagery isΒ
great i love the lines about the fairiesΒ
and the last line about AliceΒ
A lovely write i enjoyed
Smiles and Best wishes DebsΒ
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Thanks Debs, I enjoy my garden and those dew drops with the sun shineing through was the inspiration.
Cheers Byd0nz
Morning BydOnz!!......this was fun......seeing through your eyes.......the magic of the morning garden and its possibilities........I Love anything having to do with faeries!!......and this was very compelling stuff....,..but it was the final lineΒ "It would be intoΒ the eyesΒ of Alice" that reallynbrought this home for me......and left me with an honestly happy smile.....ALL STARS.......well done brother poet!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xoΒ Β ?
Β Hey thanks Tony, I'm happy you like this.there is Β
a lot of inspiration that comes out of the garden.
Cheers
Hey B, wonderful poem just thought you might want to know a couple of typos but an excellent write!
Hi, thanks Lisa Pd, glad you like this one, and yes typos, I,ll fix
Cheers