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Fading

Fading

Technology
erasing,
folding,
shaping.
Viewpoints
created,
canceled.
Heads
in the
cloud.
Losing
perspective.
Fading away.
Tech zombies.
Constant
influence
attached
to the
face.
The soul.
Views
erased,
dictated,
force fed.
Brainwashed.
Tech brainwash.
Tech changing.
The few
controlling
the many.
Has always
been.
The few
controlling
the many,
on a
global scale.
Tech zombies!
Beware the
fading.
Beware
the loss.
The loss of
individualism.
Fading to
oblivion.

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Tony Taylor

Dude, I so LOVE your stuff......and I'm SO on the same page......It has ALWAYS been this way......"The few controlling the many.."......and some of the phrases you came up with here are Way Cool my friend ~

                                          ~ "Beware the fading.."

                              ~ "Constant influence attached to the face.."

Isaac Asimov would love this!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....Always a pleasure JP!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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The fish of the sea

Damn, I knew as soon as I clicked that Tony would comment before me on this one! But in truth, this is a very resonating write. Yes, technology broke the system and I highly agree that it has done more damage than good. It's ethical and unethical at the same time.... I wish I had more time to discuss this further. 

Let's just say that "Black Mirror" broke me! 

Fantastic write.

Kind regards,

Your friend Max

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E.J. Waling

Thank you Fish. We are entering interesting times. Thank you for your generous comments. JP

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E.J. Waling

Hi Tony, as always thank you for you kind words. JP

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Right on JP! Some of it already gone and trying to fade back in only AI won't let it ! nice write....................Jim

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E.J. Waling

Hi Jim, Yup AI’s going to be a real game changer. Thank you for reading.
JP

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Marion

Excellent work as usual John x

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E.J. Waling

Thank you MP. 
Love your work by the way!

JP

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