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Failure to Succeed

So I am sabotaged again
Given an effort to do a thing

Only to see it be flung off the cliff

Dashed into the rocks below

What crisis is this?
what name do I go I give
 failure to succeed?
What title do I bestow on inaction?
I drink morning coffee making air castles in my head

I draw unconnected conclusions

Undirected delusions
feeling betrayed by myself

So how can I remove myself in this and overcome 
How can satisfaction in failure be achieved?
Unknown says my heart, unknown

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Jim "The Lad" ....

one success in a hundred failures can still add up to huge payoffs with diligence! just my thoughts from a thought provoking write!..............Jim

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The fish of the sea

Self fulfillment... yea one of the hardest things to achieve in life. So dont stress Laraine, we are all in this together! (Refer to the industry Superfund ad as a joke) XD

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laraine tillman

I know I am perhaps enlarging the issue in this write 
,. But at the time I wrote it certain events  just collapsed on top of me after all my best was in there.  Sometimes the lesson isn't in "success" sometimes it is in just the try

Thankyou for your comment and that is the reason I wrote this because I have  realized that the heart is such a light and force to recognize
Thank you. Laraine​​

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Gwendoline

I loved how you used the heart to respond, like our inner self that can be so bewildered by it all.

Feeling betrayed by myself 

I think we all have felt this. A good write here , I enjoyed 
Gwen 

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Being Me

Failure is one less step you need to take before success!  If at first you dont succeed then try, try again. Someone wise said that. Bearing this in mind it goes that failure is a sometimes necessary step in gaining that longed for success. That's a positive way of looking at it 😉 x

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