Poem -
Fantasy
Strolling on this island enchanted!
Seeking for your loneliness supplanted.
Surely in this lovely place you'll find,
Your knight in shining armor so kind.
In the woods; the delightful deer prance by,
Other movements of creatures catch your eye!
What a wonderful place this must be!
Full of life and other wonders to see!
Suddenly you're surrounded by drooling beasts!
Never satisfied with their carcass feasts!
You're shocked at what rules in your hopeful dream!
You wake up with a nauseous sweating scream!
No knights, only death at the rotting helm!
You had entered the Komodo dragon realm!
Ā
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before young girls begin to date they might want to read the book, "The Gift of Fear"
Well I'm not a young girl so.i will pass on that Jim...lol...great write my friend X
young at heart with wisdom is an awesome thing as you seem to be! thank you so much Marion!
Entertaining write as always Jim , superb imagery .Ā
thank you Rob, and thanks for the heads up!
Ooh I dont wanna meet thst on a dark night lol brilliant write Jim ladšš¹ā¤ļø
one bite and you probably would die without help. then it tracks you down to finish you off! lol! me neither! thank you friend!....kind of like salt water crocodiles, they move around!
Jim no poetry stone unturned when you write sir and so good to see.
A theme of fear and brilliantly conveyed and written ang a real roller coaster of a poem.
Always a joy to read you and what a poetry blessing you are.
Top marks and we also have dragons here in Wales, but they're a bit shy when it comes to tourists!
Thanks again Jim and remain poetry enriched.
thank you bunches Shaun!
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Dragons cool.Ā
thank you Liliana, my cool friend!
Fantastic narrative Jim. With a good message of warning within. I definitely never want to take my chances with a Komodo dragon thank you very much. I will remain under my rock me thinksĀ
lol! Gwen! thank you! just trying to wake up the young that they might go into relationships with eyes open, those dragons can't climb trees, and they only exist on certain islands,, lol! please don't hide!..............................Jim
Awesome poem here Jim, gosh I love komodo dragons. The closest we can come to Godzilla in our day and ages, Apex hunters, beautiful and deadly creatures. FantasticĀ
thank you Max! XD Wasn't to honor dragons, but they are cool! thank you for honoring me with your support!
XD sorry Jim, I get overly passionate sometimes... Awesome poem
nothing to be sorry about! do you guys get any of those creatures where you are in Aussie land....if that is where you are of course?!Ā XD!
thank you bunches Greg!
thank You Hj!
A monster of a poem sir Jim ..
Oh' by the way,
I met something similar while wearing a kimono on a jet ski in Sri Lanka.
No kidding ... NevilleĀ