Farewell

I'll  never forget you
I think of you a lot
Especially when am scared
But even when am not
It was hard to say goodbye
I couldn't say a lot
My oxygen decreased
My throat closed and locked
Holding on to your handÂ
Slipping away like golden sand
Trying to keep you near
In fear of the time you disappear
Unable to watch you leave
It was me who could not breath
Follow the signs its time to leave
Out of the exit, into the breeze
Take a breath and say goodbye
Am Trying not to cry
As I wipe away the tears I say
Good luck
It's time you went away
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What does everyone think ,any comments appreciated
Greetings Dewd26,
Sometimes the emotional words of the heart which may be silent, and says nothing, speaks a whole lot louder, than the words emitted from those of the highly vocal voice...The mouth reluctant to speak the words of a sober and protective heart, can only prolong the realization, that everything that glitters isn’t gold and its’ sad, that its times, such as this, that takes us having to involve ourselves, (head first), instead of heart led, in order to realize it. To lead by a mind filled with lust instead of the emotions of the love starved heart, many times, clouds the true meaning of a lasting (true) relationship. Lust exist only in the mind of the (beholder), thus love is accepted and experienced by (both) involved parties. Sometimes the words we choke to hold onto but need to expel, because of care for another and not for ourselves are our own. These are the feelings that need to be addressed, re-evaluated, regurgitated, expelled and corrected the most... Allowing the same rules to be the judge of both, on the same playing field of the emotionally confused heart and the lust fed mind. Thus allowing the true emotions of the heart to stand and deliver, instead of the allocating this decision to the sometimes one track mind…Really liked your poem…”What doesn’t kill us allows us to grow from it even stronger……”
Kind regards,
Jim
OMG thank you for this. Reminds me of my Grandma! Words can't explain thank you for writing this
Glad you liked my poems. Thankyou for taking the time to read them. I wrote this thinking of my grandadÂ