Poem -
The Feeling of Faith
The feeling of faith can't be explained or earned
It is something felt not learned
Something from inside
That doesn't come with a guide
Just like you can't explain to childless women
The pain of a mother losing her children
Or to a fast moving ant
The rootedness of a plant
Trying to explain the feeling of faith is useless
Without experience the word is meaningless
But don't write it off just yet
To deny yourself from feeling it
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Comments
Expression of the following lines are praiseworthy-
"Try to explain the feeling of faith is useless
Without experience the word is meaningless
But don't write it off just yet
To deny yourself from feeling it"
With Love,
thank you Ravindra =)
Adilien, I like the subject matter you have been choosing, you're exploring and that's a very positive thing, describing the feeling of faith felt genuine and your timing was really good on this piece.........another strong write my friend........tony 5*s xx
thank you tony, yes i'm trying to explore a lot of topics to make my writing more colourful (and not just filled with all the typical teenage girl things like crushes and love) =] thanks for the support xx