Poem -

Feeling low

It's hard to describe 
what goes on in the mind 
of a person feeling so low, 
It's like standing in the middle 
of a busy street not knowing 
which way to go. 
When people ask you say you're fine 
Because deep down you know they don't care, 
Trying to control all these feelings 
It's like trying to breathe with no air. 
It's hard to find the good 
That's mixed between the bad, 
When every thought or memory 
Just makes you feel so sad. 
It's hard to try stay positive 
When the whole world gets you down, 
So tired of plastering a fake smile
To try and hide my frown. 
The only thing to do 
When nothing goes your way, 
Is to just keep telling yourself 
Tomorrow is a new day....

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Michael Champion

Our minds cause us more suffering than the World does.

Take care.  x

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Jasmine Dryer

this was both relatable and amazing. spoken like true poet

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Ravindra Kumar

Beautiful, I like not only the style of composing the  poem but also sincere suggestive nature of the poetess. Thank you, Miss!

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