Feels Like A Dream
The Sudden Tragedy Of Losing You Feels Like A Dream
I Got So Used To Having You Around && Now Your Gone
It Just Seems Unreal
I Was Forced To Remain Strong Knowing My Main Homie Gone
The Happiness I Once Had Feels Like A Dream
The Way My Smile Lit Up Like The Stars At Night
I Once Felt Like I Was On Cloud 9 Like I Was High Off Life
It Was Like Being A Little Kid In A Candy Store
The Love You Once Had For Me Feels Like A Dream
You Cared For Me Like No Other && Protected Me As If Your Life Depended On It
The Love You Had For Me Was Like The Love A Mother Have For Her Child
The Reality Of Never Seeing You Again Feels Like A Dream
It's Like You Were Gone In The Blink Of An Eye
I Never Imagined Having To Say Goodbye
As I Remember Kissing Your Cheek One Last Time , It Feels Like A Dream
My Heart Raced , I Screamed That I Wanted You Back , I Cried As Loud As I Could But Nothing Happened
A Huge Piece Of Me Was Buried When They Lowered My Brother Into The Ground
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WOW!! ~ 4everK.....this is INTENSE brother poet.......a great dedication piece to the loss of someone so near & dear to you........ This is the kind of poetry that comes directly from the heart of a man..... it can't be faked or discounted....... its beauty is inherent........ and I loved every word of it....... I'm sure you know many who will be proud of you for this write........I hope you are proud of yourself.......thanx for sharing this with us all...........ALL STARS...... well done my friend....... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!........T xo
Hi 4everK I am sorry for your loss i too lost
a best friend such a hard thing to deal with
In your poem you honor your friend
with beautiful heartfelt words of how
you miss him/her, be proud of this
write it is honest and from your heart
best wishes Debs
Hi 4ever__K,
I have suffered a similar loss, my poetic brother, but mine was the loss of my only sibling, my dear younger Sister. I have suffered as you so adeptly wrote of. Nothing seems real. Gone in a heartbeat. The final goodbye. Excruciating, losing a part of your soul forever.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry