Poem -
Fetus...
Stubble speared the new moon
Breaking the egg
As golden
Alabaster quietly admitting
All uncertain treasures
Have a price bathing
As a fetus
Screaming
"I am in repair!"
But if I take my intuition's
Advice
I will paint
The cracks with wantonness
And the splattering
Itself
Will sing
A holy tune
As yet
Unsung...
Tony Taylor
For: Salvador Dali
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This is a remarkably apt poetic echo of Dali's painting; matching surrealism with surrealism.
Oddly, it has the same flavour. It seems to illicit the same response deep in the gut.
Bravo!
J ;)
Thanx so much JASON!!........ it came to me in a short dreamscape type nodding caused by my meds....... when I awoke..... the words were there.......I knew which painting...... because I Love Dali so much.........I woke up...... found the picture in 2 or 3 minutes........ then wrote the poem in 10 minutes......... It is the only poem I didn't first write down with pen into my notebooks........ strange and wonderful.......thanx again my friend....... smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
A beautiful tribute to one of the greatest artists in history, Salvador Dali. If you and Cherie ever come to visit us in Florida, we have to go to the Dali Museum in St. Petersburg.
He cared not what his critics thought
His brush was very free
He told them I'll paint what I feel
And not just what I see
So because he stood his ground so tall
And was such an anomaly
His paintings hang in museums throughout the world
Displaying the "Great Dali"
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Thank you Dear Brother Poet LARRY!!........ if you read the comment above I left for Jason you'll understand how this came about........ it was one of the strangest experiences I've ever had writing........ How I would LOVE to visit the DALI museum....... it's funny because, just yesterday a friend of mine who lives in Florida...... made the same suggestion......a sign?...... who knows....... not an impossibility for sure........thanx again my friend......ttyl.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
My Dear Brother Tony,
A strange experience indeed. Sometimes I think our dreams can be prophecies. Your words about coming to Florida, "not an impossibility for sure", have made my day. We'll keep a light on for you.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Hi Tony, this is so speculative ## # loved the picture too ##
Xoxo
Leah
Hey Thanx LEAH!!...... so glad to see you back..... always appreciate your support girlfriend......... hugs-n-smiles.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
Wow you can't pen like this and get away with it - what a momentous ode to D A li
What a sculpture you have presented us
Pure heart and soul and the torture
The torture for the man
Great piece Tony - admire you!
Stay calm in the fire of the earth
Breathtaking
luVvvv Jai:)?
Love you JAI!!!!....Thanx so much for this amazing comment my friend......look forward to our next chat bro....... be well .......talk hard!!........T xo ?✳✴☀
Oh bother, you nailed it! When i saw that it was for Dali, it made perfect sense :)
XO,
Dario
YES!!......thanx DARIO!!...... I'm a fanatic about DALI!.......... appreciate the positive feedback brother poet!!........ talk soon...... peace and hair grease ........smiles........T xo ?✳✴☀