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FiGhTinG aNgELs

Your hand, so soft
so old
not cold
Your hand, so white
so grey,  too light
Your hand, I hold, too long
too tight
Too tight.   I hold.  Your hand.
Tonight.

Your hand  So soft  So old
Too cold
Too gone Too here
Too far     So near
Your hand I hold too tight
So. Tight.
Your hand so cold
So wrong.  Not right.

Not here    Still here
Too gone   So near
Too dear   Too white
Too cold    Not right

Your hand so soft too cold too
old so grey not light so wrong
not right.   Your hand so fine,
All mine  Hold tight
Your hand so cold
​​​​Not Mine.  Not Right.
Let. Go. Your. Cold. Still. Hand. Do. I. Tonight.

Marion Price(2020)

 

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Jill Tait

Awww so sad & pinned as always coz u never fail to amaze me ❤️❤️❤️

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Marion

Aw thankyou for your amazing support Jill...and your amazing poetry love...I always look.forward to.a daily dose of Jill ...you make me smile 💕

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Jill Tait

Well I always look forward to daily dose of Marion too ❤️❤️🥰

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Being Me

OMG... Soooo sad. To hold someone's hand as they die. Oh Marion what you must go through.... Many hugs 🤗🤗 x

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Marion

Hi Love...this is actually about my nan...I sat with her a few nights near her time. We would like to do this on wards but it is usually family where poss as just not enough staff on though I know in ITU during covid where the ratio of nurse/patient is small...they did this...bless them 
hugs 💕

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Marion

Thanks so much Cleo 🤗🤗

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Pratibha Savani

Oh wow Marion. So sad but captured beautifully in your layout and arrangement of words. But so reassuring and comforting for that person to have a someone hold their hand when they are nearing death. Ssoo pinned. Px💜

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Marion

Thanks so much Pratibha 💕

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