~ FINDING COMFORT ~
On days so lovely
A kindness
Sweeps over the shore
And those accustomed
To summer's song
Bask
In the warmth and glow
Of this day's gifts
Wrapping themselves up
In its perfection
As if
To sing the praises
Of god's own seasons
And their many reasons
For having been born...
On day's so lovely
No shadows cast
Those seasoned seagulls
Patrolling the shore
They're happy people
Promoting summer's song
So I whisper softly
To my love
She smiles
While sinking her toes
Deep into the sand
And finding comfort
In god's own seasons
With her own reasons
For having been born...
On day's so lovely
An understanding
A symbiosis
Warming my heart
And connecting me to
The pure harmonies
In autumn's song
I sing along
Feel transported
Into god's own garden
Into god's own seasons
Where its final comfort
Washes over me
Confirming my many
Spiritual reasons
For having been born....
Tony Taylor
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Such a divine poem T, there is a sense of grounding in this write. Mindful reflections spill from your lines, tracing the spiritual path so many of us find our thoughts lingering onto. The last stanza gives that sense of enlightenment of the synchronicity and order of existence. I love the use of seasons here. It gives a strong and beautiful image to the message conveyed
Love your pen :)
Gwen xxx
Your comments are always insightful and VERY inspiring GWEN.....you make me want to be better and better as I learn the beauty in your thoughts and impressions....I feel fortunate just to know you as an artist and dearest of friends......you have my heart love....thanx for this!!.....smiles!!....T xo : )
Hi Tony,
Very nice.
Love,
Terry & Anne.
xoxo ;)
wow! another classic masterpiece Tony! love it!........................................Jim
Thanks JIM!!....you're a kind soul!!.....Big smiles!!......T xo : )
Death's grace's and rugged conversations have always been my favorite.
Being born we are helpless or so some think, and in death we think the same.
Glad you think differently.
I do my best LILIANA.....at trying to convey my perceptions on this subject matter.....poetry is my outlet.....glad you found some part of it relevant to your own belief system.....yours is powerful pen.....and I appreciate your insights!!.....stay groovy dear poet sister!!.....so glad you're here....lots of love to you and yours!!......T xo : )
Powerful pen interesting perspective of me.
I dearly hope you are on the nose right about that.
I call for peace and prosperity, for one and all, the weak, the tall.
I especially have a golden rainbow of cherishes set aside for you and your incredible love.
I hope you are happy my friend.
Hi Tony,
good to see you at it again. Nice writing here.
JP
Thanx JP!!......yeah its been a while.....I'm working at it!!....smiles....T xo : )
awsome poem
i wish
i could write
like this
Thanx GREG!!.....you're too kind......hope all is well with you and yours!!....T xo : )
Hey Tony T .. there aint nobody in their write mind not gonna love this .. and like it or not, I believe I am more than qualified to make such an assertion .. tis bloomin brilliant n beautiful & that's saying summat sir :)
Sir NEVILLE!!...you are the coolest cat to grace my pages.....and I do believe you're overly qualified!!....thanx so much for the kind words....even though I think they are little too generous!!...... Big smiles!!......T xo : )
Sir T. I am so happy that I decided to visit Cosmofunnel at 3am.. Only to experience another Superb piece of poetry from you my friend.. This is much needed in these cold winter days.
‘Pinned of course.
3am!!.....well I'm glad to have been there.....hope all is well my friend.....the magic of poetry is often a comfort for me as well kind sir!!....thank you for this!!......Big smiles!!......T xo : )
This is so spiritually uplifting Tony that even I smiled...for a moment lol. You know this reads as if written from a person finally at peace with themselves, the universe and their god. I found myself envying such a person. It has such a calm and gentle peaceful feel...I love it...hugs x
YAY!!...I made you smile!!.....I feel fortunate MARION!!.....I got lucky that I caught you in such a mood.....you have made my day!!.....lots of love!!.....Big smiles!!.....T xo : )
Just beautiful.
to endure the truth of a thing is to Poet.