Finding Me
I close my eyes, salty air caresses my skinÂ
I breath in deep and feel the love withinÂ
The warmest touch upon my frecklesÂ
The sun kisses me like water specklesÂ
A gift of love the kindest placeÂ
Feeling the sun upon my faceÂ
The visual dream is yet so realÂ
No one in time can know how I feelÂ
Its a party of the soul, ecstasy of the mindÂ
This is the place I’ve been looking to findÂ
Where no one judges or says a wordÂ
And the voice of an angel is all that is heardÂ
It gives me life and soothes my soulÂ
If I was broken it makes me wholeÂ
The warmth of the sun beneath my wings
Deep inside my heart it singsÂ
I’ve been looking for you, I’m glad you cameÂ
I hear your voice, I feel the sameÂ
I’m here to save you and make it right
Open your eyes it’s all out of sightÂ
The vision you see is a game of thought
This is the lesson that you’ve been taughtÂ
Your mind doesn’t need to scream or chatterÂ
Just breath in deep and let the problem shatter
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Comments
There are places where you can literally feel yourself recharge. There is something in the air that makes you feel "alive" and this is the feeling I get from this. That you have found one of those places. I like the rhyming in this x
Thank you really appreciate that you can feel it too!! Great feedback- sending love and light! ? ? xÂ
A lovely sense of weightlessness that flows here GEM.....I think BEING ME said it perfectly though......not much I can add......aside from the fact that you have some VERY well crafted phrasing running throughout this piece!!......ALL STARS!!.......well done.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Yes BEING ME summed it up really well- and it’s good to back to writing after a long break- don’t know what’s taken me so long to come back- thank you for the positive love and input. Peace and hair grease ✌? Gem xÂ
I too have found the place you describe Gem, there is so much magic around my little garden...especially at night...fab write, hugs ?