Poem -
Finding Myself Within
We thought of dreams so fair
Spoke of what was now and then
Is it real or just pretend
Or a moment to transcened
In the midst of an uprise
The award being tight reprise
Where were you when i cried alone
Now I've got to let it go
Who cares who see's
Our time as it takes its toll
The place of space
Where there is no forced control
I saw his unique brand
With blood and tears he'd grown
As his graves being filled with sand
To bury his flesh and bones
Transcending beyond compare
Travelling multiple lightyears
Where were you when i cried alone
Now I've got to let it go
Who cares who see's
My time never took its toll
This place of space
Where I never lost control
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Comments
This is definitely a song brother poet....,,I can hear it...... I'm a musician by profession and as soon as I began reading this I could hear the music in your rhythm and timing..,, speaking to the universal mind that exists within us all...., it has a compelling melancholy to it and should be delivered with minor cording on guitar or keyboard....... definitely got me jazzed!!.....ALL STARS!!....,.. well done .....I enjoyed this very much ~ Cool stuff Joseph!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Your right brother poet! I had this tune in my head when i wrote this and sung it back to myself. It would be cool to have a jam im a drummer and play abit of guitar. Thanks for the feedback T much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it.