Poem -
FIVE STEPS AWAY
There was a sign out of nowhere...
Message not quite clear...
Surely, that was not meant for them to see...
Five more steps to the life that they wanted...
One shouts for joy...
Two jump high in the air...
Three go into their...
Happy dance...
Five more steps...
We better get going...
Which way?
For us...
It may take up to...
Twenty...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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I agree FEATHERS!!........ but even though it may take twenty.......... the effort alone affords the person taking action.......... many moments of growth, learning, and experience.......... this is such powerful subject matter.......... for........" As A Man Thinketh" ~ so is he!!.......... well done sweet poetess!!.......... Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
Hey sparrows song. A very well thought out piece of work. I like to take baby steps because I am getting old lol .just keep that childlike quality that exists in your writes and you will always be young at heart .my respect to you . Rock
Powerful message ! Yet another thoughtful and insightful work !
Hugs as always !!!
:)
Hello Tony...
Thank you for your kind words and support that you give...
Thank you for being there with your heart, smiles, and...
All encouraging...
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Hello Rock...
Doesn't matter how we get there?
Some have wheels for legs...
Some have stand helpers...
Some can only do it...
From the bed...
You feel old?
If you still have a few more years to go...
Thinking you are...
You will be soon enough...
Thank you for your comment...
Hugs and Smiles!
sparrowsong
Hello Richard...
Hug!! :)
Thank you very much!
sparrowsong
Thank you !
:)
Hello Sis Flower Girl...
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you for your kind words and support!
Purple luv and hugs xo :)
sparrowsong