Poem -
Flatearthers
I said....
I understood, the gravity of the
situation...my bowling ball
was falling,
falling..at the same rate
as my reputation..
Although the vacuum that
I find within my own
free will, isn't rotating..
it stands deathly still..
No I'm floating..I'm floating
on Angel's wings..
and while I'm coping
with all this life can throw..
I was suspended .
and disciplined
for all I know.
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Comments
Oh very well written.. Especially this bit
All of it extremely good. Soooo deserves 5 stars (in my opinion).Ā A very entertaining read x
I'm toying with the flat earth concept..it appeals to me...thankyou Being Me....x
You're very welcome,, you have some good lines in this. I have to confess though, I do not believe the Earth is flat x
I do not believe its roundĀ and that I'm spinning at 1000 miles an hour on a sphere revolving around the sun at 60,000pp miles an hour...lol...and the water stays put because we are spinning...maybe I believe in spirits and fairies too.....I used to as a kid...
IV read the above comments and do you know what? I got a completely different vibe from this write, a suspension from work, some trauma, life on stop and uncertainty ....isn't it amazing how we all perceive different writes...fab write Pauline ?
Yes it's TRUE...It began like I was being told off by management..AGAIN..
I think I agree with Marion on this one, it definitely has deeper meaning and sorry to quote, a sense of trauma. But its really a very clever write. Also always know that no matter what, you will have friends in the Cosmos! The Fish of the Sea.