Poem -
Flaw
I'm not perfect
Let me be the first to say
That flaw is my pet poodle
and I walk him everyday
Sometimes I walk away but
At the end of the day
He follows me all the way home
Destroying small things along the way
But not once have I ever cast him
Off for I am him and he is me
And flaw (I think) is all humanity will
Ever be no matter
How many times we train him
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Wow!! ......this borders on "straight-up" philosophical poetry........like the San Andreas fault in humanity..........yes.......I agree........humans are innately flawed........and it is from these depths of knowing........that perfection is found.........for without tangible experience of the worst...........can the "best" be found.........and so your poem deserves extra praise for it's depth of subject matter........well done brother!!...........smiles.............T xx
Thank you so much!
Love this curious, very nifty little write love, we all flaws, no one is perfect, it's trial and error in every day life, we learn and grow from every experience, love and hugs nardine xoxo
As always you for your feedback Nardine!
Thank everyone so much and to those that my absence disappointed I apologize!
Great writing skill. Love the way u give life to this Flaw. Keep it up, I enjoyed reading.
Thank you very much Sharon I will