Poem - 24 September 2020, 13:29

Flowers

In display

Flowers Oh! How you are splendidly in your beautiful display, all in abstract rows, your beautiful family college colours excells, your tinted green and yellowishtinted vein leaves are a marvel as well, how you awaken to the morning dawn, after closing up for your beautiful night's slumber, array yourselves into possies of beds in repose for the full glory of the days rays,in God's full glory!!!

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Freestyle Narrative Prose

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Happiness

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The fish of the sea24 September 2020, 22:18

Yep I like this one a lot. I`m not trying to critique your work, because that's not what the Cosmos is about, but if you would like, perhaps provide your work in verse, maybe that way it might be a bit easier for people to read all the way through.

But again, in fitting your style its a great write, and I like it a lot, very engaging and entering to read. All the Best the Fish of the Sea.

Ps, the artwork in the pictures intrigues me...

David Shepherd24 September 2020, 22:46

G'day I'm trying to workout how to format verse lines now that I have said that to you I think that I have worked it OUT !!! I am very glad that you like my style of poetry the paintings in my format are mine as I like to explore the ideas I have in mind thanks again David

The fish of the sea25 September 2020, 00:01

Hi again David, awesome! I hope versing works out for you! But be sure to not let it dull your unique sense of poetry! And wow you should post some of your art here too they look cool! All the best, The Fish of the Sea.

David Shepherd25 September 2020, 12:34

Dear fishes of the sea I thought that I would tell you a funny joke that I made up after thinking about the Marx brothers. Oh! What is humorous jokes of all nothing short of a good hit on your funny bone on your elbow or Doctor Quack small hard plastic hammer on the crossed knees. No! No!! Witism is the answer my friends! But what you say! I say I say what did the chicken crossing the road say to his mate the Quawking duck that wouldn't shut up! Stick your Quawks fair up your arse! Or is that a ginger arse that you've got!!! I'll fart Cluck! Cluck!!! Cluck!!! Hahaha Hehehe!! With a smile on my beak and comb my hair back!!! I hope that you like my style of humour, good wishes and have a most blessed day David

David Shepherd25 September 2020, 13:01

I thought that I would add another element to the joke and that is a pigeon who says to the clucking chicken and Quawaking duck I won't be able to Cooee Cooee!! But Pooee Pooee!! And also the chicken should of said stick it up your flappen arse!!!

The fish of the sea27 September 2020, 01:53

Heh thanks David, I did like your joke, bit on the harsh side for me, but I still chuckled at it when I read it. I hope your going well, I look forward to your next poem. The Fish of the Sea.