Poem -
Followed Directions
Behind thee; a glistening white tree!
As thou gaze over the gulf of misery.
Yonder; a great and spacious building,
With pointing finger and no one yielding!
A mighty castle! without foundation.
Broad path leading to its invitation.
Many elite do claim it as their own,
Filled with the selfish; of egos grown!
In the lonely mists of darkness below,
Carried away in the depths of Satan's flow!
So many lost! walking a forbidden path,
Forever wandering in regretful wrath!
Thou followed directions of scripture told,
Found thy way back to; The Shepherd's fold.
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Very deep write Jim, it flows beautifully...great stuff x
Thank you most kind Marion!
That was a wonderful read/write JIM!!......you have such a passion for the biblical and wonderment of God's good earth and far beyond.....into the religious realm of dreams......this is a lovely example of a magical and quite spiritual sonnet!!......ALL STARS!!......A pleasure to read!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Hello Tony! glad you found my sonnet to be spiritual and more! It is right out of that book I sent you. Thank you for your comments and support! wishing you all the best!..........................Jim
Clever Jim! Enjoyed!
Thanks Max! You changed pics!
Beautiful mystic poetry Jim, keep it up.
thanks Gerard, I'll do my best!
Wowsas I almost lost this sheer brilliance my Jim the lad ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕💙💕
thank you Jill, my talented friend!
Mmm tis u who is the talented one Jim my lovely lad ❤️💕❤️💙
I like this. Castles may look grand and inviting on the outside, but inside they’re cold, dark, dank and smelly...
Thank you JP!
honored Liliana!