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Forever, not at all.

I wouldn't have gave forever away not for a face that's new

In ancient codes the spirit longs, and I'm conjoined to you,

In some form of light had said That when we meet we'll know

Yet someone come along, to you, And you, you had to go,

What was within her eyes but view, a colour not compared to mine,

I felt as if we were of heaven, a sort of love divine

Were her lips of kindred, pressed lightly as she spoke of song,

for all the words I'd written truly , your partings felt so wrong,

Had I outstretched the boundaries of a place you comfortably knew to well

And pushed the days uncertainty in to the grips of hell,

For all the flames that burn upon, the lively smiles and warm embrace,

had left in while that holy space, where nothing held your place ,

Echoes of a vacancy where eyes had greeted that ancient call,

in all the ways I'd loved you dearly , is forever , not at all.

 

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Richard Waters

Who wants to be " Alive " for all of time ? " Who wants to live, FOREVER ? " The thought of existing " trillions " of years hence, frightens. UNLESS, YOU HAVE A SOULMATE. Of, course. In whose arms you can escape reality...of still having eternity to go. On, a " journey " without an end. Her passionate love for you will deaden senses to the fact that there is only so much you can do !!! :):) If, you know what I mean !! SURELY, YOU DO ? ( Nudge Nudge, Wink Wink....say, no more ? ) 
LOVE, CONQUERS THE HORROR, AND DESPAIR, OF BEING BORED. To, death. How ironic, is " that " ?? !!! :) See, in 2020 vision, the paradox as well. Of, love being every " thing " but not the destroyer of physical fundamentals. OF, LIFE. And, the representation, as well as perception, of its value to the " soul " considering what is enjoyed where.
Do you concur with this statement ? With its " Highlander " approach to " the infinite grand design " GOING ON ALWAYS.  The movie diagnosis of what should be preserved as well as " served " somewhat troubling. Do you not think ?
INTERESTING WRITE, IN DEED ! All, the best to you, always. :)  X 

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Richard Waters

" THE FORCE " comes into, the " equation " ? Surely ? If, you, think about, that, or, that sort of thing. But, not relating to " The Entity " of course, which is a different " ball game " entirely. " Paranormal Activity " is questionable, if, only as a related topic. I, think, we have to look more to " GRAVITY " if truth be known. Or, even some localized " Super-natural " dis-order. Associated with context, of Scottish ancestry, within the product. As shown. " Braveheart " just there, to taunt, one, about what can go on, if, thoughts be put to something else, completely, or not. " THE FEAST " of Royal " Game " tempting to likes of " there " sort. " Mrs Brown " not really any thing but dubious, in nature. Right ?
What, do you consider appropriate ? FOREVER !!!

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Being Me

It is so sad when a couple are ripped apart by infidelity. This poem really resonated with me x

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